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To: indiansciencefiction@...
From: arvind_drmishra@...
Date: Tue, 1 Jul 2008 14:47:18 +0000
Subject: [indiansciencefiction] Re: Under Estimate

--- In indiansciencefiction@yahoogroups.co.in, Vishwa Mohan Tiwari
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Lately there is some evidence of 'neuroplasticity ' that is the power
of brain tissue to manifest itself the way it is required.
So Swapnil's story now holds some water !
Let us hold our breadth....may be a chopped limb may be growing
somewhere !

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> "Having come in better contact with Swapnil, I found time, in my
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> To: indiansciencefiction@yahoogroups.co.in
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> Date: Mon, 30 Jun 2008 07:46:26 +0000
> Subject: [indiansciencefiction] Re: Under Estimate
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> --- In indiansciencefiction@yahoogroups.co.in, Vishwa Mohan Tiwari
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> story using science very well. The story has 'storyness, and grasps
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> > Subject: [indiansciencefiction] Re: Under Estimate
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